10 months ago
I love this!!! Your characters are really well made and you have a great style! The only critique I have is maybe adjust the pacing in some parts or change the pose, maybe add another frame because staying on one frame for too long can make things feel a little disjointed. Like 69-71, I would change the pose, maybe a bobbing of the head, to show him slowly falling asleep. But it's really nice work! Great Job!
I'm on the right! This is where other suggested boards will go!